I have a good friend. We met when I was five years old; she is my neighbor. We became friends and played together all the time. Last week, my friend took part in the female basketball match. She is good at basketball, so I encouraged her to join our school team. The team played so well that they came to the final yesterday. The match was excellent. In the end, my friend’s team won the first place. I feel so happy! I plan to buy her a present and congratulate her. I feel so proud of her; she inspires me too. We give each other encouragement to move on. We will be good friends forever.
希望这样更流畅清晰一些！
My Friend我的朋友2
第一篇已经写得很好了，只需要做一些微小的改进：
"Zhang Dong is my best friend. He joined our class last semester as a boy. Both of us excel in English, so we often engage in English conversations during our free time. After school, we frequently play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I struggle to catch up with him. Not only is he an outstanding student with excellent grades in all subjects, but he is also very kind and modest. He has a fondness for both popular and classical music.
He comes from a family of three, being the only child. His father is a doctor, while his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Despite Zhang Dong's family being affluent, he dresses in a simple manner. His dream is to become a lawyer.
Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy highly praised by both teachers and students."
For the second piece, I'll make a few tweaks to enhance the flow and clarity:
"Zhang Dong is my closest friend, a boy who shares my proficiency in English, allowing us to chat frequently in that language during our free time. Additionally, we share a passion for football, often enjoying matches together. Zhang Dong's dedication to his studies is remarkable; he often studies late into the night and perseveres with his homework, resulting in excellent marks across all subjects. His musical taste spans from popular songs to classical music.
He hails from a family of three, being the sole child. His father works as a doctor, and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Despite his family's wealth, Zhang Dong's attire remains modest. His aspirations lie in becoming a lawyer in the future.
This is my friend, a bright and amiable boy whom I value dearly in our friendship."
Lingling is my best friend作文100字3
doyouhavebestfriend?linglingismyfavoritefriend,isalsomyclassmate.doyouwanttomakefriendswithher?
asweetsmileisoftenonherface,whichmakesherlovely.linglingisclever.sheisgoodatallschoolsubjects.inthefuture,sheisgoingtobeanenglishteacher.becauseshethinksenglishisveryinteresting!ialwaystakeherasanexampleinstudy.shealwaysmakesgooduseoftime.sheiskindandalwaysreadytohelpothers.anystudentinourclasswhohastroubleinstudyinglikestoaskherforhelp.
iamproudofhavingsuchafriend.